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badovsky said on Aug. 21 '10

stylish

mcdseven said on Aug. 21 '10

real celtic twist on the mark, very much like it. well done. kerning to tight on logotype, loosen it up a tad.

almosh82 said on Aug. 22 '10

Thanks Alex,Paul!
Kerning adjusted.

Jonnyd said on Aug. 22 '10

Nice

lumavine said on Aug. 23 '10

Not sure I love the upper case As with the lower case y, but the mark is exquisite!

vernics said on Aug. 23 '10

Very nice, Shyam :)

thomas said on Aug. 25 '10

Very stylish and elegant. Even after your first update, I have the feeling tracking remains too tight...

Pidgey said on Aug. 26 '10

I can't help it. I feel terrible, but this is me critiquing. It's pretty. It's elegant, love the colors... but it has the silhouette of a maxi-pad.

almosh82 said on Aug. 27 '10

Come to think of it I see an infinity symbol rotated clockwise. Anyways its all about different perspectives and I totally respect it :)
Thanks a lot guys for all your comments and feedback.Much appreciated.

Noetic Brands said on Aug. 27 '10

Nice indeed!

altwebmedia said on Aug. 28 '10

Ni looking. Good work

ashmenon said on Aug. 28 '10

Love the mark, and the subtle gradient you did on it. Although I think considering the variable width typeface you chose, maybe the mark could benefit from a little variating widths? Just an opinion there.

As for the type, overall I find it a bit disturbing. After that stylish highnote that the mark leaves me with, the type brings me to a screeching halt. It's a shame, because this has the potential to be really amazing. I think one of the things you could change to really amp it up is to manually edit the angle of the y (the left arm of it, make it slightly more vertical so that it's parallel with the A beside it.)

lukeskybaker said on Sep. 08 '10

The type is kerned a little too tight for my taste, but overall great job!

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