how does it work with the text?
right now its a really nice mark with the explanation, but where is the context?
smartinup said on
Jun. 01 '07
@climax: even with out reading the discription, i got the idea of opening, or providing some sort of health benifit. but yes, i would like to see it with the type treatment as well.
The final result with the type, in my opinion, didn't turn out well. They were meant to be used separately. I came up with a combination that I liked, but the client wasn't feeling it . . . so they got what they felt worked better, what else is new.
This is a great looking mark, but it looses a bit of its impact alongside the type. They were meant to be used separately you say? Sorry, but that sounds a little odd to me. I think you could've found a type treatment that worked with a little more exploration, and perhaps created a size rule where the mark had to be three times the height of the type or something. I think it's mainly the layout that makes the mark loose impact with the type.
Wohooo... it almost doesn't need any type part at all :) Layers indeed!
drewboy said on
Jan. 29 '08
Ryan has made a good point about type & mark sizes. But also I don't think the type is well suited to the mark. I would have gone for something san serif - Gill Sans, Foundry Sans, Frutiger, something like that. The angularity of the mark needs a fairly robust typeface. Just my opinion! I really like the mark though.
Art Machine said on Jun. 01 '07
smartinup said on Jun. 01 '07
ClimaxDesigns said on Jun. 01 '07
right now its a really nice mark with the explanation, but where is the context?
smartinup said on Jun. 01 '07
Thomas said on Jun. 01 '07
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