On the bottom U where it is cut off on the left, can you try cutting it at the same curve of the first U at the left? This way it won't be so abrupt. Does that make sense? It would also be cool to see a version where none of the letters connect to make the mark. You would read Undu and it would still create the same interesting shape. Just typing out loud. I still really like this. :-)
Gona try that kevin I really appreciate the comments since when working for one self, we dont have an art director or a client to refer to, Thanx for the comments greatly appreciated.
Wow, that's great! I love the shape, it's wonderful. I prefer the gradient and I do like the colors. I wonder if you can push them more toward a gold and fuscia (on my screen it looks yellow & pink)? It seems to want that retro-classy look to my eye :)
reds said on
May. 28 '07
i'm not sure how the previous versions look like but i'll always love ingenious manipulations of characters to form logos. good work!
Craven91 said on
May. 31 '07
I agree with Ocularlink - the second U (as it is now) is throwing off the design.
It doesn't read as well as the first three letters.
I think this is unique. I prefer the white treatment, I dont know if this needs a symbol. I'd try that color treatment on the unDu on its own, maybe connect the type the way you have it. it looks modern.
Probably someone already mentioned it, the proportion letters and image... I would scale the letters up to 125% of now... still, clever concept, nice logo!
OcularInk said on May. 20 '07
makote said on May. 20 '07
kosta said on May. 21 '07
makote said on May. 21 '07
mc said on May. 22 '07
daleharris said on May. 28 '07
RickDT said on May. 28 '07
reds said on May. 28 '07
Craven91 said on May. 31 '07
It doesn't read as well as the first three letters.
Kliment said on Jun. 01 '07
xzentrico said on Jun. 02 '07
akitash said on Jun. 03 '07
koriman said on Jun. 06 '07
sisudesigns said on Jun. 08 '07
arad said on Jul. 02 '07
omerbey said on Dec. 29 '07
http://www.dedeman.com/
and a few other logos. still nice.
FUTY said on Jan. 17 '08
Kliment said on Jan. 24 '09
criaojos said on Sep. 15 '10
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