Logopond

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krinimal said on Apr. 17 '10

i read it as wkac the first time!!!

Type08 said on Apr. 17 '10

Hey buddy, my first impression was that it almost shares the style and the concept of the Brandclay's (http://logopond.com/gallery/detail/79715) previous alias and logo Penflare (http://logopond.com/gallery/detail/49700). You even picked the blue as the core color as well (not saying that you copy or anything, it just really really reminded me of that at the first sight). Now, since I pulled half of his folio out, why don't you try to give it some movement, like this one http://logopond.com/gallery/detail/52930 ? It might be an very fresh lookwith the dynamic feel describing the process of creating brand identities! (Nadam se da neces shvatiti krivo, stvarno ne mislim da se radi o kopiji, vec o prilici da napravis nesto ipak ono, bomba, novi pristup, jer se time moras identificirati kroz naredno srednjerocno/dugorocno razdoblje pa se isplati zericu vise potruditi... Drzim figee!)

zephyr said on Apr. 17 '10

Agreed with Alen... I think adding some movement would take this to the next level. Good work on the type overall!

Lecart said on Apr. 17 '10

The r isn't clear enough, you could pull down a bit his "leg" (don't know how to call it) :) i like the overall feeling!

logomotive said on Apr. 17 '10

I disagree about looking like brandclays. Also IMO script is not something that you want to mess with too much in that way. See script is based on brush strokes and when you go tweaking it it distorts things and you lose the beauty of the strokes.

logomotive said on Apr. 17 '10

Here's a link to look at. A good friend of mine and I have studied and enjoyed his work for some time. He has beautiful work http://www.borgeslettering.com/ might help.

Rokac said on Apr. 17 '10

Thanks all for your thoughts!
@Alen
Thanks buddy. I hear what your saying. I see some similarities with Penflare (Brandclay's) logotype but again I think they can live in peace together:) My inspiration came from Oronoz's work (http://logopond.com/gallery/detail/64619)
(Sve kul Alen, nista krivo shvaceno:) Onaj link koji si izvadio, fala ti na tome, probat cu nesto i u tom smjeru).

@Fred
Cheers mate!

@Lecart
I'll try that with the "leg":) Thanks!

@Mike
I really appreciate your input. I was looking for that kind of comment (technical side of the type). I'll check the Borges's work. Thanks for the link!

@Anthony
Thanks for your thoughts and constant support.